Cách viết bài Advantages and Disadvantages of Internet IELTS Writing

1. Phân tích chủ đề mẫu 

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Cùng tham khảo một vài dạng câu hỏi về Advantages and Disadvantages of Internet trong IELTS nhé:

• The internet has brought about many changes into our day to day life. Nowadays we are doing things such as mailing, contacting, banking and communicating much faster. Do these developments have more advantages than disadvantages?

• What are the advantages and disadvantages of using the Internet?

1.1 Advantages of the Internet

Cùng DOL tìm hiểu các mặt lợi ích của Internet khi ứng dụng vào IELTS Speaking và IELTS Writing qua các gợi ý sau nhé.

Vocabulary

• search/look for information : tìm kiếm thông tin

• utilize the Internet: tối ưu hóa việc sử dụng Internet

• get access to the Internet: tiếp cận với Internet

• do an Internet search : tìm kiếm thông tin trên Internet

• communicate virtually: giao tiếp qua không gian mạng

• entertainment purposes : những mục đích giải trí

• Thanks to: nhờ vào

• online shopping : mua sắm trực tuyến

• online transactions : giao dịch trực tuyến

• advantageous: có ích lợi

• be accessible to  : tiếp cận được với

• alter: thay đổi

1.2 Disadvantages of the Internet

Cùng DOL tìm hiểu các tác hại của Internet khi ứng dụng vào IELTS Speaking và IELTS Writing qua các gợi ý sau nhé.

Vocabulary

• be susceptible to: dễ bị ảnh hưởng xấu bởi

• verification: việc xác minh

• repercussions: hậu quả

• uninformed netizens : cư dân mạng không hiểu biết và cung cấp cho họ

• supply somebody with something : cung cấp cho ai với cái gì đó

• pave the way for: mở đường cho

• cyber-crime: tội phạm mạng

• thieves : kẻ trộm

• tamper with: giả mạo thay đổi để phá hoại

• a waste of time : sự lãng phí thời gian

• entertainment and relaxation purposes:  mục đích giải trí và thư giãn

• lose track of time : mất kiểm soát thời gian

• go online: lên mạng

• get a lot of spam: nhận nhiều thư rác

loss of interpersonal and intrapersonal skills : sự mất mát của các kỹ năng cá nhân và kỹ năng xã hội

2. Bài mẫu topic advantages and disadvantages of internet ielts

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Đề bài 1: The internet has brought about many changes into our day to day life. Nowadays we are doing things such as mailing, contacting, banking and communication much faster. Do these developments have more advantages than disadvantages?

The internet has transformed people’s lives. It has changed the way we communicate with each other, transact business and access information. Although the internet has both positive and negative aspects, I believe that its merits outweigh its demerits.

To begin with, thanks to the internet, people can now contact their friends, family and colleagues faster and more efficiently than in the past. Most people have internet connection on their mobile or computer and as a result, they can always stay connected with their near and dear ones. For example, social networking applications like WhatsApp, Facebook and Twitter allow people to chat and share videos and other important information. Similarly, through facilities like video conferencing and webinars people from different parts of the world can now participate in online conferences which eliminate the need to travel to other countries and cities for attending such programmes.

Additionally, online shopping and banking have saved people a great deal of time and effort. People today can sit at home and buy their groceries, books or household appliances from online sites such as Amazon or eBay and their stuff will be delivered at home. Moreover, transferring and withdrawing money have become very easy today with online facilities offered by most banks.

On the other hand, a great deal of offensive and obscene content is available on the web and children have easy access to them. Many antisocial elements and terrorist groups like ISIS recruit youngsters through the internet. Internet addiction is another problem. Many people are now addicted to the internet and wasting their time. This can affect their career and relationships.

In conclusion, the internet has greatly benefited people in different ways. Although it has some negative aspects it can be handled efficiently by implementing proper laws and regulations and through parental supervision.

Đề bài 2: In the past, people stored knowledge in books. Nowadays, people store knowledge on the internet. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, people tend to store knowledge on the Internet rather than in books.  From my point of view, I believe that the positives of this trend outweigh its negatives.

To start with, using the internet as a storage for knowledge has two great benefits. First, the internet provides people with quick and easy access to a great variety of information. Whereas in former times, people had to spend much time leafing through numerous pages in search of knowledge, modern people can look for different types of information with just a mouse click. Moreover, with the internet and the help of electronic devices, knowledge is accessible anytime and anywhere. To illustrate, even while running, people can still absorb information from podcasts or audio books, which would be impossible with traditional books. Moreover, the internet allows people to keep more diversified types of knowledge. Since the internet is capable of storing audios and videos, nowadays, film and musical legacies can be stored and shared with our future descendants with ease.

Beneficial as it is, storing knowledge online also causes two main problems. Firstly, internet users must be aware of fake news. As anyone can post anything online without verification and repercussions, loads of unreliable information awaits uninformed netizens and supplies them with inaccurate knowledge. This can be dangerous in case the information is health-related or law-related. Secondly, intellectual copyrights are at risk due to the boom of the internet. In recent years, due to how loose cyber laws are, the internet has become a tool for millions of websites to distribute pirated publications in exchange for advertising revenues. These copyright infringements inflict substantial losses on the publishing industry and discourage aspiring authors.

To sum up, although storing knowledge on the internet has many disadvantages, it also proves to be immensely advantageous in numerous cases.

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